Well done, good stuff, albeit somewhat grim!
How hard boiled can you get! Expect a call from Clint Eastwood begging to play Sarge!
Ha ha! Thanks guys, it means a lot that you liked it. Part 2 takes hard-boiled grimness to a whole new level. There's a twist ending I hope you like.
You da man!
Plenty of grim imagery Woodsy, but you make being a borderline alcoholic sound like a bad thing!
hee hee! Cheers guys. Sarge soon sobers up in Part 2! He has to!
Only got a chance to listen just now, but very well done mr Woods! Your extensive promotion campaign did prepare me for a certain level of grimness, but what had me surprised was that your character doesn't seem to be as fond of Sword as you are. :)And I admire the imagery you put into your descriptions here and there, good way with words.Can't wait to find out how it ends. :)Best -- Paul
Thanks Paul, means a lot to me. Glad you enjoyed it. Part 2 to follow in June. I am just writing a new Sarge story and your comments about imagery help a lot. Cheers!